Getting over excited!!!!!

OMG I CANNOT WAIT TILL THE 7TH I WILL BE GOING TO CURRARONG AND WE CAN FILM I HAVN'T DONE MYPLACE FILMING SINCE LATE NOVEMBER!
{other good news will be in next post:-}

I have continued the drowning scene script :-}

*at the beach sun is shining no rain*
*E stands up*
E:why don't we go for a swim?
J:errrr ok but i'm not a brilliant swimmer
*they run to the water*
E:It's sooooooo cold
{J snickers}
j:were getting to deep lets go back!
e: no way im not even up to my neck yet!
{e goes further out}
{j turns head back to sand see's L}
j:lucy's here!
{j turns head back to e - e plashing screaming}
j:OMG!
l: whats going on! {screaming }
j: em's drowning!!!
{l stands there shocked}
{j runs back gets stick turns around }
l: were did she go?!
{j crying screaming}
{l runs off to get some body }
j:{walking in the water} em,em EM!

so what do you think for a drowning scene!?